Grammaire/hockey

Grammaire/hockey
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Grammaire/hockey
Message de logan421 posté le 11-02-2016 à 10:02:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plait si ma grammaire est bonne ou pas du tout?
Merci pour vos réponses.

My favourite sport is the hockey ,that itself plays with 10 players and one keeper.the but of the hockey is ta win the match in ta score plus that the adversary . I am begining the hockey when i was 10 years .i started to royal Uccle sport, i played there until my 15 years. After i was going to royal Léopold club one of the best club in belgium. I like il very much. This years se have as objective ta be champions of belgium . But that will to very hard in working very hard and in is playing in team we will can to win against allteam

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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-02-2016 21:30

Réponse: Grammaire/hockey de gerondif, postée le 11-02-2016 à 17:42:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert.

My favourite sport is ~~the~~ hockey ,~~that itself plays~~(mettez une voix passive) with 10 players and one keeper.the but of ~~the~~ hockey is ta(to) win the match in ta score plus that (vous écrivez un peu n'importe quoi avec des mots qui restent en français. c'est and, pas in, c'est to , pas ta) )the adversary . I am begining the (mauvais temps, mauvais verbe, mauvaise orthographe; mettez start au prétérit) hockey when i(majuscule) was 10 years old .i] started to royal Uccle sport, i played there until my I was 15 ~~years~~. After i was going(mettez un prétérit simple) to royal Léopold club one of the best clubs in Belgium. I like il very much. This years se(quel est donc ce sujet "se"???) have as objective ta be champions of belgium . But that will to(mettez la base verbale de to be) very hard.(point) in working very hard and in is playing in team we will can (can n'a pas d'infinitif, donc pas de futur, il faut utiliser un remplaçant) to win against all teams

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