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Myth and hero/Churchill

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Myth and hero/Churchill
Message de leslie37 posté le 16-01-2016 à 16:33:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois faire une expression sur un héros et j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour mes fautes.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Voilà la première partie:

To illustrate this notion, I will talk about Winston Churchill. First of all he was born in 1874 in an aristocratic family. He studied at one of the most famous prestigious British boarding school which is Harrow and where everybody seemed to be hopeless concerning his skills.
Churchill can be considering as the most significant hero of the twentieth century. Thanks to the harsh political and historical context of the Second World War and his own exceptional fate, on the one hand, WC undoubtedly stands out as a leading figure. He’s also regarded as one of the most war-time leaders Europe has ever seen. He became Prime Minister in 1940 and thanks to his determination; he has inspired the Allies to victory against the Nazi Germany. As Hitler’s regime grew to power in Germany, he was one of the few to recognize the danger of this new dictator. Anyhow, whether or not we regard him as myth or hero, he’s a prominent actor of the fight against Nazi Germany.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-01-2016 19:14


Réponse: Myth and hero/Churchill de gerondif, postée le 16-01-2016 à 19:23:54 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu:

To illustrate this notion, I will talk about Winston Churchill. First of all, he was born in 1874 in an aristocratic family. He studied at one of the most famous prestigious British boarding school(pluriel) (which is) Harrow (and) where everybody seemed to be hopeless concerning his skills.
Churchill can be considering(participe passé) as the most significant hero of the twentieth century. Thanks to the harsh political and historical context of the Second World War and his own exceptional fate, on the one hand, WC undoubtedly stands out as a leading figure. He’s also regarded as one of the most war-time leaders Europe has ever seen. He became Prime Minister in 1940 and thanks to his determination;,(virgule) he has inspired (préterit, action implicitement datée) the Allies to victory against the Nazi Germany. As Hitler’s regime grew to power in Germany, he was one of the few to recognize the danger of this new dictator. Anyhow, whether or not we regard him as myth or hero, he’s a prominent actor of the fight against Nazi Germany.



Réponse: Myth and hero/Churchill de leslie37, postée le 17-01-2016 à 11:39:04 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup!




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