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Biographie/ Sherlock Holmes
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Message de deckeurs posté le 13-01-2016 à 14:39:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce texte s'il vous plait , il doit contenir des mots liens.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Sherlock Holmes has never existed but he was created by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle in 1887.He always lived in 221B baker street in London with Dc Watsons his biographer. Sherlock is consulting detective he creat his job and he is addict his job and even sometimes a little bit crazy . Holmes is a genious know every street of London and he has an extrodinary brain of deduction. he died in a fight with her enemy Moriarty in a fight he fell in Reichenbach in Swietzerland.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-01-2016 22:22
Message de deckeurs posté le 13-01-2016 à 14:39:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce texte s'il vous plait , il doit contenir des mots liens.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Sherlock Holmes has never existed but he was created by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle in 1887.He always lived in 221B baker street in London with Dc Watsons his biographer. Sherlock is consulting detective he creat his job and he is addict his job and even sometimes a little bit crazy . Holmes is a genious know every street of London and he has an extrodinary brain of deduction. he died in a fight with her enemy Moriarty in a fight he fell in Reichenbach in Swietzerland.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-01-2016 22:22
Réponse: Biographie/ Sherlock Holmes de deckeurs, postée le 13-01-2016 à 16:56:38 (S | E)
correction point de vue tournure de phrases et vocabulaire bien sur et bonne utilisation des mots liens ;)
Réponse: Biographie/ Sherlock Holmes de here4u, postée le 13-01-2016 à 18:00:46 (S | E)
Hello !
Sherlock Holmes has never existed but he was created by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle in 1887.He always lived in 221B baker street in London with Dc Watsons his biographer. Sherlock is X consulting detective he creat
his job and he is addict (temps + particule manquante) his job and even sometimes a little bit crazy . Holmes is a genious WHO? know every street of London and he has an extrodinary brain of deduction. he died(attention au mélange des temps ...) in a fight with her enemy Moriarty in a fight he fell in Reichenbach in Swietzerlandunderlined = very clumsy ...
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