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Correction/fantôme
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Message de trauzeur posté le 08-06-2015 à 13:20:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger ce devoir?
Merci pour vos réponses.
When I was little, I remember one day I was sleeping in my room it was about 6 in the evening. I woke because I had heard a sound of people coming from the living room. Unfortunately when I woke up, I looked at the corner of the room and I saw in the dark, something like a ghost standing in front of my bed. He was wearing a long coat and a hat. I didn’t dare to get up of bed because I was scared stiff. I remember when I was from 4 till 10 I used to be frightened of ghost stories so when this happened, I thought I was going to die. Luckily for me, my mother came 10 minutes later just to see if I had woken up. When she turned on the light, I finally realised that it was my father’s coat which was hung up on the wall with a hat on the top. I was relieved but insisted to have this coat taken out of my room.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-06-2015 15:37
Message de trauzeur posté le 08-06-2015 à 13:20:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger ce devoir?
Merci pour vos réponses.
When I was little, I remember one day I was sleeping in my room it was about 6 in the evening. I woke because I had heard a sound of people coming from the living room. Unfortunately when I woke up, I looked at the corner of the room and I saw in the dark, something like a ghost standing in front of my bed. He was wearing a long coat and a hat. I didn’t dare to get up of bed because I was scared stiff. I remember when I was from 4 till 10 I used to be frightened of ghost stories so when this happened, I thought I was going to die. Luckily for me, my mother came 10 minutes later just to see if I had woken up. When she turned on the light, I finally realised that it was my father’s coat which was hung up on the wall with a hat on the top. I was relieved but insisted to have this coat taken out of my room.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-06-2015 15:37
Réponse: Correction/fantôme de notrepere, postée le 08-06-2015 à 23:28:45 (S | E)
BonjourWhen I was little, I remember one day I was sleeping in my room. It was about 6 in the evening. I woke because I had heard a sound of people coming from the living room. Unfortunately when I woke up, I looked at the corner of the room and I saw in the dark, something like a ghost standing in front of my bed. He was wearing a long coat and a hat. I didn’t dare to get up from the/out of bed because I was scared stiff. I remember when I was from
4 and 10 I used to be frightened of ghost stories so when this happened, I thought I was going to die. Luckily for me, my mother came 10 minutes later just to see if I had woken up. When she turned on the light, I finally realised that it was my father’s coat which was hung up on the wall with a hat on the top. I was relieved but insisted to have this coat taken out of my room.Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
