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Message de jadee55 posté le 11-02-2015 à 18:48:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ces deux petites lettres s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup d'avance, bonne soirée.
Jade
Dear Molly
How are you , I hope all is well in London, Last week I received your DVD. I watched this one and I don't was disappointed. I love so much this movie for many reasons. First, in this one, the main actor is my favourite actor : Leonardo Di caprio. Then, the story is interesting, this movie plunge into the 30's year
We discover the extravagant parties, the mysterious Gatsby, the beautiful love story of Gatsby and Daysie.
It's tumultuous and excinting. I liked so much that i Buy the novel of this movie. My turn, I sent you a dvd entitled Django Unchained. I will give you 6 clues: Slave, Friendship, head-hunter, love story, Leonardo Di caprio and 19's year
good viewing
Lots of love
xoxo
Dear Jo,
It's been a long time since we last met, so I propose we should see each other by the end of the month. I invite you for dinner. I hope that lasagna are always your favourite meal because I found a new italian recipe. I Bought cheese with a red wine which made of France. By way of dessert, I propose you a Tatin pie with vanilla ice cream. After, we will did a digestive walk in the park. We will admire the beautiful landscape. I believe that we will have fun like in the good old days.
I wait your email for confirmate
xoxo
Your favourite cooker
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-02-2015 21:55
Message de jadee55 posté le 11-02-2015 à 18:48:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ces deux petites lettres s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup d'avance, bonne soirée.
Jade
Dear Molly
How are you , I hope all is well in London, Last week I received your DVD. I watched this one and I don't was disappointed. I love so much this movie for many reasons. First, in this one, the main actor is my favourite actor : Leonardo Di caprio. Then, the story is interesting, this movie plunge into the 30's year
We discover the extravagant parties, the mysterious Gatsby, the beautiful love story of Gatsby and Daysie.
It's tumultuous and excinting. I liked so much that i Buy the novel of this movie. My turn, I sent you a dvd entitled Django Unchained. I will give you 6 clues: Slave, Friendship, head-hunter, love story, Leonardo Di caprio and 19's year
good viewing
Lots of love
xoxo
Dear Jo,
It's been a long time since we last met, so I propose we should see each other by the end of the month. I invite you for dinner. I hope that lasagna are always your favourite meal because I found a new italian recipe. I Bought cheese with a red wine which made of France. By way of dessert, I propose you a Tatin pie with vanilla ice cream. After, we will did a digestive walk in the park. We will admire the beautiful landscape. I believe that we will have fun like in the good old days.
I wait your email for confirmate
xoxo
Your favourite cooker
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-02-2015 21:55
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