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Présentation orale/aide
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basMessage de emilie8231 posté le 02-06-2013 à 10:10:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici une présentation que j'ai préparée pour un oral d'anglais. J'aimerais votre aide pour la correction des fautes et la tournure des phrases ...
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Par avance je vous en remercie :-)
Bon dimanche !
My name is xxx. I was born in xxx the 15th of December in 1989 and I am 23 years old. I live in xxxx in a small flat. I have a brother who is 27. He works in the navy. I love playing football with my friends. I like reading books (novels principally), listening to music, and walking in the nature. I am a funny and an optimistic girl. Sometimes I’m shy. I studied the computer science but I didn’t pass my exam. Then I was anemployed, and when I looked for a job on the Internet, I read an announcement for this job. So I inquired about its characteristics, and I liked the responsibilities and the rigor asked for this job. I postulated on the web site and I was contacted to take the tests.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-06-2013 17:25
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Réponse: Présentation orale/aide de hushpuppy, postée le 02-06-2013 à 17:35:58 (S | E)
Bonjour,
C'est très bien, il y a des conseils en violet :
My name is *****. I was born in ***** the 15th of December in 1989 and I am 23 years old. I live in Toulouse in a small flat. I have a brother who is 27. He works in the navy. I love playing football with my friends. I like reading books (novels mostly), listening to music, and taking nature walks. I am a funny and an optimistic girl. Sometimes I’m shy. I studied the computer science but I didn’t pass my exam. Then I was unemployed, and when I looked for a job on the Internet, I read an announcement for this job. So I inquired about its demands, and I liked the responsibilities and the rigor required for this job. I applied for the job on the web site and I was contacted to take the tests.
Réponse: Présentation orale/aide de emilie8231, postée le 02-06-2013 à 17:42:55 (S | E)
Ah super ! Merci beaucoup hushpuppy :-)
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