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Message de sse27 posté le 27-05-2013 à 19:26:10
bonjour
je passe bientôt mon oral d'anglais et j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un me corrige s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I-introduction
The hero can be a historical or fictitious personage a current personage who has marked the tradition, the historical or the daily life. The myth and the heroes are a part of the imagination and the collective identity.
We are going to ask the question, are the heroes current different from heroes of past?
In the first place, we go to see that heroes of past are anchored in the society. Secondly we go to see that the heroes of our in the daytime are different
II- developpement
The myth and the heroes are present in the society since several times, so the heroes are anchored within this population is present to give the hope to the person
We can take the example of the captain America which is a fictitious hero created during the second world war to restore hope in the American face has the war. Indeed this hero is used as propaganda means. Captain America represents the American power. We can also saw a document which represents the most famous symbols of the USA. It is a photo montage representing the world of entertainment with Mickey Mouse created by Walt Disney, Marylyn Monroe, Elvis Presley or John Wayne, a famous actor in western films. These persons allowed other people to dream of succeeding in America. This was a part of the myth. But now the heroes are different.
Effectively, the heroes of our daytime distances itself with regard to the heroes of past, he differentiate to them actions, Today a hero is a man or woman who is characterized by his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realized heroic actions.
The best example , in my opinion who represent typifies of hero is barrack Obama because it is a hero of the society, indeed he knew listened needs of the American society such as the creation of a mutual poorest.
III-conclusion
To conclude, we can say that myths and heroes have changed our lives. Real or not real, they have a capacity to change the mind of many people, to help them and to change the course of story. They do courageous things, they fight for something or they want to serve others. They represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame their comportment; they changed the history, and our story.
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Message de sse27 posté le 27-05-2013 à 19:26:10
bonjour
je passe bientôt mon oral d'anglais et j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un me corrige s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I-introduction
The hero can be a historical or fictitious personage a current personage who has marked the tradition, the historical or the daily life. The myth and the heroes are a part of the imagination and the collective identity.
We are going to ask the question, are the heroes current different from heroes of past?
In the first place, we go to see that heroes of past are anchored in the society. Secondly we go to see that the heroes of our in the daytime are different
II- developpement
The myth and the heroes are present in the society since several times, so the heroes are anchored within this population is present to give the hope to the person
We can take the example of the captain America which is a fictitious hero created during the second world war to restore hope in the American face has the war. Indeed this hero is used as propaganda means. Captain America represents the American power. We can also saw a document which represents the most famous symbols of the USA. It is a photo montage representing the world of entertainment with Mickey Mouse created by Walt Disney, Marylyn Monroe, Elvis Presley or John Wayne, a famous actor in western films. These persons allowed other people to dream of succeeding in America. This was a part of the myth. But now the heroes are different.
Effectively, the heroes of our daytime distances itself with regard to the heroes of past, he differentiate to them actions, Today a hero is a man or woman who is characterized by his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realized heroic actions.
The best example , in my opinion who represent typifies of hero is barrack Obama because it is a hero of the society, indeed he knew listened needs of the American society such as the creation of a mutual poorest.
III-conclusion
To conclude, we can say that myths and heroes have changed our lives. Real or not real, they have a capacity to change the mind of many people, to help them and to change the course of story. They do courageous things, they fight for something or they want to serve others. They represent a model, an ideal man. And nobody can blame their comportment; they changed the history, and our story.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-05-2013 21:31
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-05-2013 21:54
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Réponse: Oral /correction de hushpuppy, postée le 30-05-2013 à 19:01:29
Bonjour,
Je commencerai avec l'introduction. Les corrections sont en bleu et les conseils sont en vert :
I-introduction
The(AI-Article Indéfini) hero can be a historical, fictitious, or current person who has marked
We are going to ask the(démonstratif) question, are
First, we will see that heroes of (AD) past are anchored in
Réponse: Oral /correction de hushpuppy, postée le 30-05-2013 à 19:38:27
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II- developpement(orthographe)
We can take the example of
But now the heroes are different.
Effectively, the heroes of our daytime distances itself with regard to the heroes of past, he differentiate to them actions, Today a hero is a man or woman who is characterized by his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realized heroic actions.
The best example , in my opinion who represent typifies of hero is barrack Obama because it is a hero of the society, indeed he knew listened needs of the American society such as the creation of a mutual poorest.
