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Message de aliv posté le 05-05-2013 à 16:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mon oral.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
We now live in a modern world where technology and science are very important aspects. progress allows us to better understand the world and improve the quality of life. but it is also necessary to control it if it goes against the ethics. In addition, it creates new freedoms and allows developed countries like vote as women in french. The idea of progress reflects the complexity of the new world. But if the progress goes against ethik it causes the decline of society.
In class we are studied a document which presented two different kinds of toutism. In the first part we talked about mass tourism and in the second part we talke about a new form of tourism :Alternative Tourism
Generally, these travelers are accustomed to plentiful resources, and due to a lack of information, they aren't always aware of how limited these resources are in developing countries.Thus, problems can arise when travelers maintain their normal consumption patterns in places that simply can't accommodate them. In the end, someone is going to suffer.
In general, alternative tourism is an alternative to the mass standard tourism as philosophy and attitude. The main accent in these travels is the preserved natural environment, authentic atmosphere and cuisine, and local traditions. In this type of tourism, visitors often interact more with the locals rather than simply looking at big buildings or historical sites. The local cultures, families and communities are emphasized over mainstream tourism. There are three main categories of this type of tourism: nature-based tourism, cultural tourism and adventure tourism.
in my opinion, I think progress can help the development of some countries. Tourism is a good form of help because it stimulates the economy of a country by creating jobs, for example, and allows tourists to discover a new culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2013 19:07
Message de aliv posté le 05-05-2013 à 16:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mon oral.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
We now live in a modern world where technology and science are very important aspects. progress allows us to better understand the world and improve the quality of life. but it is also necessary to control it if it goes against the ethics. In addition, it creates new freedoms and allows developed countries like vote as women in french. The idea of progress reflects the complexity of the new world. But if the progress goes against ethik it causes the decline of society.
In class we are studied a document which presented two different kinds of toutism. In the first part we talked about mass tourism and in the second part we talke about a new form of tourism :Alternative Tourism
Generally, these travelers are accustomed to plentiful resources, and due to a lack of information, they aren't always aware of how limited these resources are in developing countries.Thus, problems can arise when travelers maintain their normal consumption patterns in places that simply can't accommodate them. In the end, someone is going to suffer.
In general, alternative tourism is an alternative to the mass standard tourism as philosophy and attitude. The main accent in these travels is the preserved natural environment, authentic atmosphere and cuisine, and local traditions. In this type of tourism, visitors often interact more with the locals rather than simply looking at big buildings or historical sites. The local cultures, families and communities are emphasized over mainstream tourism. There are three main categories of this type of tourism: nature-based tourism, cultural tourism and adventure tourism.
in my opinion, I think progress can help the development of some countries. Tourism is a good form of help because it stimulates the economy of a country by creating jobs, for example, and allows tourists to discover a new culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2013 19:07
Réponse: Correction /modern world de gerondif, postée le 05-05-2013 à 17:32:25 (S | E)
Bonjour,
bleu: à revoir
We now live in a modern world where technology and science are very important (aspects). progress allows us to better understand the world and improve the quality of life. but it is also necessary to control it if it goes against the ethics. In addition, it creates new freedoms and allows developed countries like vote as women in french(sens ?? France, pas French). The idea of progress reflects the complexity of the new world. But if the progress goes against ethik it causes the decline of society.
In class we are studied a document which presented two different kinds of toutism. In the first part we talked about mass tourism and in the second part we talke about a new form of tourism :Alternative Tourism
Generally, these travelers are accustomed to plentiful resources, and due to a lack of information, they aren't always aware of how limited these resources are in developing countries.Thus, problems can arise when travelers maintain their normal consumption patterns in places that simply can't accommodate(bizarre verbe associé à patterns) them. In the end, someone is going to suffer.
In general, alternative tourism is an alternative to the mass standard tourism as philosophy and attitude. The main accent in (français traduit)these travels is the preserved natural environment, authentic atmosphere and cuisine, and local traditions. In this type of tourism, visitors often interact more with the locals rather than simply looking at big buildings or historical sites. The local cultures, families and communities are emphasized over (choix de structure) mainstream tourism. There are three main categories in this type of tourism: nature-based tourism, cultural tourism and adventure tourism.
in my opinion, I think progress can help the development of some countries. Tourism is a good form of help because it stimulates the economy of a country by creating jobs, for example, and allows tourists to discover a new culture.
Réponse: Correction /modern world de gnanga, postée le 07-05-2013 à 13:30:59 (S | E)
Hello dear ALIV,
I think your translation in the bottom is good, but I underlined some errors that I put in blue, so you have to correct them:
We now live in a modern world where technology and science are very important aspects. progress allows us to better understand the world and improve the quality of life. but it is also necessary to control it if it goes against the ethics. In addition, it creates new freedoms and allows developed countries like vote as women in french. The idea of progress reflects the complexity of the new world. But if the progress goes against ethik it causes the decline of society.
In class we are studied a document which presented two different kinds of toutism. In the first part we talked (wrong tense) about mass tourism and in the second part we talke (wrong tense) about a new form of tourism :Alternative Tourism
Generally, these travelers ( foreigners is better)are accustomed ( what do you want to say? accoutumés ce qui dans cette phrase laisse perplexe ou accompagnés?to plentiful( use another word) resources, and due to a lack of information, they aren't always aware of how limited these resources are in developing countries.Thus, problems can arise when travelers maintain their normal consumption patterns in places that simply can't accommodate them. In the end, someone is going to suffer.
In general, alternative tourism is an alternative to the mass standard tourism as philosophy and attitude. The main accent in these travels is the preserved( in french de préserver) natural environment, authentic atmosphere and cuisine, and local traditions. In this type of tourism, visitors often interact more with the locals rather than simply looking at big buildings or historical sites. The local cultures, families and communities are emphasized over mainstream tourism. There are three main categories of this type of tourism: nature-based tourism, cultural tourism and adventure tourism.
in my opinion, I think progress can help the development of some countries. Tourism is a good form of help because it stimulates the economy of a country by creating jobs, for example, and allows tourists to discover a new culture.
See you soon and good luck
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-05-2013 16:14
Bottom?? cherchez dans un dictionnaire fr-gb
+ correction peu fiable
Réponse: Correction /modern world de hushpuppy, postée le 07-05-2013 à 14:12:48 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je suis tout à fait d'accord avec gerondif sauf pour la phrase avec "patterns". Je pense que c'est très bien mais peut-être qu'il/elle veut une phrase comme "daily consumption regimen".
Pour la comparaison entre les deux formes de tourisme, comment écririez-vous en français ? Peut-être penser de ça, cela vous aidera pour la bonne construction avec le mot "emphasized".
Bonne journée
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