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Message de inestkt posté le 03-05-2013 à 22:56:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
je passe le bac dans quelques jours et je voudrais savoir si ces phrases sont justes s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
For me, a myth is a story that gives and explains the origin and meaning of a human adventure. A myth has identity values of the community and provides collective landmarks emblematic. The hero evokes a charismatic figure who embodies values that can be recognized and identify by the community .
I love this part because the film Invetus I loved, I also enjoyed discovering this mythical character and understand her struggle through the various document that's why I find this part interresante and .It cannot be denied that nelson mandela is a myth.
I must admit that I do not find this very interesting because Steve Jobs is not a character that fascinates me I have the feeling thatthat only his success and the fact that is revolutioned the tecnology that makes him a hero modern but to my mind it's not just that a hero.
To conclude, history was marked by people who defended the populations. Today they are considered as a hero by all people. But everyone can be the hero of someone. A hero can be an ordinary person like me or you.The myth or the hero is the bearer of a cultural identity in which the nation can be recognized they transmits messages and values through social boundaries, geographical and cultural.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2013 08:04
Message de inestkt posté le 03-05-2013 à 22:56:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
je passe le bac dans quelques jours et je voudrais savoir si ces phrases sont justes s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
For me, a myth is a story that gives and explains the origin and meaning of a human adventure. A myth has identity values of the community and provides collective landmarks emblematic. The hero evokes a charismatic figure who embodies values that can be recognized and identify by the community .
I love this part because the film Invetus I loved, I also enjoyed discovering this mythical character and understand her struggle through the various document that's why I find this part interresante and .It cannot be denied that nelson mandela is a myth.
I must admit that I do not find this very interesting because Steve Jobs is not a character that fascinates me I have the feeling thatthat only his success and the fact that is revolutioned the tecnology that makes him a hero modern but to my mind it's not just that a hero.
To conclude, history was marked by people who defended the populations. Today they are considered as a hero by all people. But everyone can be the hero of someone. A hero can be an ordinary person like me or you.The myth or the hero is the bearer of a cultural identity in which the nation can be recognized they transmits messages and values through social boundaries, geographical and cultural.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2013 08:04
Réponse: Correction /Myth de notrepere, postée le 04-05-2013 à 03:46:05 (S | E)
HelloFor me, a myth is a story that gives and explains the origin and meaning of a human adventure. A myth has identity values
of the community and provides collective landmarks emblematic
(mal placé). The hero evokes a charismatic figure who embodies values that can be recognized and identify(accorde values) by the community .I love this part because the film Invetus
(This isn't the name of the movie, is it?) I loved, I also enjoyed discovering this mythical character and understanding her struggle through the various document that's why I find this part interresante and . It cannot be denied that nelson mandela is a myth.
(Vraiment? Il n'existe pas?)I must admit that I do not find this very interesting because Steve Jobs is not a character that fascinates me. I have the feeling thatthat only his success
and the fact that is revolutioned the tecnology that makes him a hero modern (ordre) but to my mind it's not just that a hero.To conclude, history was marked by people who defended the populations. Today they are considered as a hero by all people. But everyone can be the hero of someone. A hero can be an ordinary person like me or you.The myth or the hero is the bearer of a cultural identity in which the nation can be recognized. They transmits messages and values through social boundaries, geographical and cultural (adjectifs se place avant le nom).
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