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Correction/story of tribe
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Message de marion200 posté le 16-04-2013 à 23:33:07 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je dois faire un texte en anglais et je voulais savoir si quelqu'un peut m'aider à corriger s'il vous plaît ?
The text tells the story of a tribe that feels contempt for Maori.
The difference between the two tribes is that in one there is a leader and in the tribe of Maori there is a king and a queen.
In this text, the Chief of the tribe speaks to an audience and tells them they will never give up, and thus they signed a treaty: The Treaty of Waitangi . It's an agreement between two peoples to share the land and its resources.
They make rather brutal gestures, we see in them the animal man (ici je veux dire qu'on voit en eux l'homme animal ) . In the end, Tuteae screams to start the haka, the war dance.
Thanks a lot
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2013 23:36
Message de marion200 posté le 16-04-2013 à 23:33:07 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je dois faire un texte en anglais et je voulais savoir si quelqu'un peut m'aider à corriger s'il vous plaît ?
The text tells the story of a tribe that feels contempt for Maori.
The difference between the two tribes is that in one there is a leader and in the tribe of Maori there is a king and a queen.
In this text, the Chief of the tribe speaks to an audience and tells them they will never give up, and thus they signed a treaty: The Treaty of Waitangi . It's an agreement between two peoples to share the land and its resources.
They make rather brutal gestures, we see in them the animal man (ici je veux dire qu'on voit en eux l'homme animal ) . In the end, Tuteae screams to start the haka, the war dance.
Thanks a lot
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2013 23:36
Réponse: Correction/story of tribe de notrepere, postée le 17-04-2013 à 01:04:57 (S | E)
HelloThe text tells the story of a tribe that feels contempt for the Maori.
The difference between the two tribes is that in one there is a leader and in the tribe of Maori there is a king and a queen.
In this text, the Chief of the tribe speaks to an audience and tells them they will never give up, and thus they signed a treaty: The Treaty of Waitangi . It's an agreement between two peoples to share the land and its resources.
They make rather brutal gestures, we see in them man as animal. In the end, Tuteae screams to start the haka, the war dance.
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