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Message de iname93 posté le 04-04-2013 à 07:50:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je voudrais savoir si j'ai des fautes dans mon devoir.
Merci pour vos réponses .
J'ai mis des petits points à la place des mots que j'ai enlevés car ce sujet peut être considéré comme sensible . N'essayer pas de trouver de quoi je parle . Merci encore.
This document is a photo about ... on March 28 , 1968. The scene takes place at Menphis in Tennessee . It's a picture in white and black . We had 2 sorts of people : civilians and army . The army have guns and the civilians a sign where written " ... " . We have also on the background tank . The civilians are mainly ... . This is a demonstration for the injustice made to the .... population , the ... . The photographer want to illustrate the deployment of army for a demonstration " ... " , maybe the army use violence to the demonstrators . I find this photo interesting because for a "..." demonstrator , the army is deployed with guns and tank. This picture illustrate ... .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2013 08:39
Message de iname93 posté le 04-04-2013 à 07:50:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je voudrais savoir si j'ai des fautes dans mon devoir.
Merci pour vos réponses .
J'ai mis des petits points à la place des mots que j'ai enlevés car ce sujet peut être considéré comme sensible . N'essayer pas de trouver de quoi je parle . Merci encore.
This document is a photo about ... on March 28 , 1968. The scene takes place at Menphis in Tennessee . It's a picture in white and black . We had 2 sorts of people : civilians and army . The army have guns and the civilians a sign where written " ... " . We have also on the background tank . The civilians are mainly ... . This is a demonstration for the injustice made to the .... population , the ... . The photographer want to illustrate the deployment of army for a demonstration " ... " , maybe the army use violence to the demonstrators . I find this photo interesting because for a "..." demonstrator , the army is deployed with guns and tank. This picture illustrate ... .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2013 08:39
Réponse: Correction/ homework de laure95, postée le 05-04-2013 à 11:30:06 (S | E)
Bonjour,
This document is a photo about ... on March 28 , 1968. The scene takes place at (pas la bonne préposition) Menphis in Tennessee . It's a picture in white and black . We had (garde le même temps) 2 sorts of people : civilians and the army . The army have guns and the civilians a sign where it is written " ... " . We have also on the background tank (à mettre après le verbe + il faut l'article A devant) . The civilians are mainly ... . This is a demonstration for the injustice made to the .... population , the ... . The photographer want (conjugaison) to illustrate the deployment of the army for a demonstration " ... " , maybe the army use violence to the demonstrators . I find this photo interesting because for a "..." demonstrator , the army is deployed with guns and a tank. This picture illustrate (conjugaison) ... .
Réponse: Correction/ homework de sherry48, postée le 05-04-2013 à 13:19:36 (S | E)
Hello. I would like to add a few more suggestions.
Menphis in Tennessee.
It's a picture in white and black. Just as word order is important in describing the colors of a flag, a specific order is preferred here, too.
The army have guns...maybe the army use violence ...army is a collective noun.
... on the background
Sherry
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