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Message de angbof posté le 01-12-2012 à 18:00:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai d'énormes difficultés à construire des phrases correctes.
Je vais donc me permettre de poster mon dernier oral et je voudrais, si c'est possible, que l'on me corrige au mieux en m'expliquant mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Sales techniques Apple.
Apple has developed sales techniques specific.
For exemple to sell their Macbook. they incline screen seventy digree. Therefore potential buyer feels compelled to touch screen for can observe.
Apple think that obliging client touch produce that encourage the to buy. Because, they can better get account performance.
But, sales method not stop there.
Between when potential buyer in.
Apple store it is prohibited toss out.
So to allow buyer to order a pizza or danc and sing before a webcam.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2012 18:03
Message de angbof posté le 01-12-2012 à 18:00:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai d'énormes difficultés à construire des phrases correctes.
Je vais donc me permettre de poster mon dernier oral et je voudrais, si c'est possible, que l'on me corrige au mieux en m'expliquant mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Sales techniques Apple.
Apple has developed sales techniques specific.
For exemple to sell their Macbook. they incline screen seventy digree. Therefore potential buyer feels compelled to touch screen for can observe.
Apple think that obliging client touch produce that encourage the to buy. Because, they can better get account performance.
But, sales method not stop there.
Between when potential buyer in.
Apple store it is prohibited toss out.
So to allow buyer to order a pizza or danc and sing before a webcam.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2012 18:03
Réponse: Construction / phrases de bernard02, postée le 01-12-2012 à 19:14:50 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
en attendant une vérification plus complète, je vous propose de commencer déjà par corriger ces quelques fautes d'orthographe que j'ai repérées en bleu:
Sales techniques Apple.
Apple has developed sales techniques specific.
For exemple to sell their Macbook. they incline screen seventy digree. Therefore potential buyer feels compelled to touch screen for can observe.
Apple think that obliging client touch produce that encourage the to buy. Because, they can better get account performance.
But, sales method not stop there.
Between when potential buyer in.
Apple store it is prohibited toss out.
So to allow buyer to order a pizza or danc and sing before a webcam.
Réponse: Construction / phrases de sherry48, postée le 01-12-2012 à 23:34:01 (S | E)
Hello.
In addition to bernard02's spelling corrections, take a look at these areas.
Sales techniques Apple.
Apple has developed sales techniques specific.
For exemple to sell their Macbook. they incline_ __ screen seventy digree_. Therefore, __ potential buyer feels compelled to touch __ screen for can observe.
Apple think
that obliging __ client __ touch produce that encourage the __ to buy. Because, they can better get account performance.But, __ sales method_ __ not stop there.
Between when potential buyer in.
Apple store it is prohibited toss out.
So to allow __ buyer to order a pizza or danc and sing before a webcam
(Incomplete sentence)Sherry
Réponse: Construction / phrases de angbof, postée le 07-12-2012 à 14:47:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je vous remercie tous les deux d'avoir pris le temps de me répondre.
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