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Message de lleytt posté le 13-01-2009 à 23:43:46 (S | E | F)
I'm ***** and i'm 17. I live in ****, France with my mother and my big brother who is 21. I live in a house near from the beach. I'm studying in a economics class in an High School and i will be graduate this year.
I'm full of life, funny and friendly but, also workers and ambitious. During my free time , I like to hang out with my friend. We usually go shopping, to the beach (where we spend most of our time during summer) , to the cinema or we just talk happily. I'm a quite simple girl and I enjoy the life like she is.
I used to do lot of sport, I have practised handball in national championship and I did swimming over 5 years. I will be delighted to discover US sports.
I am eager to know the US culture because it's a lot different from mine. I really want to improve my english because the command of this language will be necessary for my futur study.
I would apreciate that you have children of my age because I think it will be an advantage/asset to integrate myself.
I'm verry happy to go to the United States because it has always been such a dream to me, that's why I would like to share your lifestyle during the next academic year. I hope learning more about your culture during this year stay.
We'll have good time together !
Friendly
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Modifié par bridg le 14-01-2009 06:49
Divers
Message de lleytt posté le 13-01-2009 à 23:43:46 (S | E | F)
I'm ***** and i'm 17. I live in ****, France with my mother and my big brother who is 21. I live in a house near from the beach. I'm studying in a economics class in an High School and i will be graduate this year.
I'm full of life, funny and friendly but, also workers and ambitious. During my free time , I like to hang out with my friend. We usually go shopping, to the beach (where we spend most of our time during summer) , to the cinema or we just talk happily. I'm a quite simple girl and I enjoy the life like she is.
I used to do lot of sport, I have practised handball in national championship and I did swimming over 5 years. I will be delighted to discover US sports.
I am eager to know the US culture because it's a lot different from mine. I really want to improve my english because the command of this language will be necessary for my futur study.
I would apreciate that you have children of my age because I think it will be an advantage/asset to integrate myself.
I'm verry happy to go to the United States because it has always been such a dream to me, that's why I would like to share your lifestyle during the next academic year. I hope learning more about your culture during this year stay.
We'll have good time together !
Friendly
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Modifié par bridg le 14-01-2009 06:49
Divers
Réponse: Correction d'une lettre de lleytt, postée le 13-01-2009 à 23:46:44 (S | E)
dsl je n'est pas expliquer pourquoi, c'est dans le cadre d'un voyage d'un aux Etats-Unis pour qu'une famille d'acceuil me choisisse .
Réponse: Correction d'une lettre de co97, postée le 14-01-2009 à 00:12:58 (S | E)
Quelques suggestions de corrections...
I live near the beach.
I study economics in a high school and I will graduate this year.
but also hard-working
during the summer
and I enjoy life as it is
I practised handball
because it's very different from mine
I really want to improve my English ...... future studies
I would appreciate if you had ......
