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Message de here4u posté le 16-01-2025 à 18:20:57 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.
1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?
2. Is male/female inequality a thing of the past?
3. Would you say that music in fundamental in your life?
4. Is a good education essential to have a ‘good job’?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le lundi 27 janvier 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Message de here4u posté le 16-01-2025 à 18:20:57 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible. De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.
1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?
2. Is male/female inequality a thing of the past?
3. Would you say that music in fundamental in your life?
4. Is a good education essential to have a ‘good job’?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !
) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons ! Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation... Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le lundi 27 janvier 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 17-01-2025 à 21:28:15 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Here is a fast answer again!
ANSWER A. Topic 1: 1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words
a lot for your help. 
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de gerold, postée le 18-01-2025 à 09:26:37 (S | E)
Hello!
Very few mistakes, I think.
ANSWER A. Topic 1: 1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results (we offered ... school results??) , and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 20-01-2025 à 17:57:19 (S | E)
Hello!
Is is time for green?
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 20-01-2025 à 18:09:02 (S | E)
Hello dears,
ANSWER A. Topic 1: 1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?: my indications - Green allowed!
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered,
including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words ( cette phrase, beaucoup trop longue, n’est pas claire et mériterait d’être allégée et éclaircie.):
The question was 'Do teenagers get on well with their parents... and not the opposite... Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 21-01-2025 à 08:36:52 (S | E)
Hello!
With the help of Gerold and Here4U, thank you
I haven't been able to correct everythingIn my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me
The question was 'Do teenagers get on well with their parents... and not the opposite...
Pour plus de clarté, voici la nouvelle expression corrigée :
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't (I don't know how to correct
)! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results. All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, untill everybody made an effort to move on... (which indeed proved to be the solution)Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de gerold, postée le 21-01-2025 à 11:52:06 (S | E)
Hello!
happynutmeg!In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't (I don't know how to correct) (perhaps it should be more explicit: ... whereas some teenagers do get on well with their parents ...)! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results. All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, until everybody made an effort to move on... (which indeed proved to be the solution) (Was "unless" the problem in the original sentence, or something else?)
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 21-01-2025 à 14:42:08 (S | E)
Hello!
Dear Gerold,
The problem was not only 'unless', but the last part of the sentence...
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 21-01-2025 à 18:00:03 (S | E)
Hello!
Happynutmeg is right. I'd say of course you had the link word wrong... But it wasn't THE solution, it was a solution...
which didn't satisfy be much... The sentence itself is much too long and should be turned in at least two...(taking advantage of this split to improve the construction...)Could anyone do that, please?
Bravo pour les corrections du début du texte. Le point de vue a maintenant changé totalement et c'est bien !
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 22-01-2025 à 07:34:23 (S | E)
Hello!
Original sentence:
But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words ( cette phrase, beaucoup trop longue, n’est pas claire et mériterait d’être allégée et éclaircie.):
New sentence:
But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results! All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless* everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...)
I put 'unless' back instead of 'untill', I don't know which is best to translate "à moins que", but it could also be "jusqu'à ce que"
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de gerold, postée le 22-01-2025 à 11:06:55 (S | E)
Hello happynutmeg!
... unless* everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...)
I put 'unless' back instead of 'until', I don't know which is best to translate "à moins que", but it could also be "jusqu'à ce que".
I agree, but the original sentence is back.
Perhaps:
... ... unless (or until) each of us made an effort (or compromised) to move on
Is this better, dear here4u?
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 22-01-2025 à 15:37:58 (S | E)
Hello dears!
The first part of the solution (putting a full stop after 'school results') is good! But I'd be really happy with a transformation of the last sentence, including what is between parentheses...
Try to think about the meaning you want to convey, more than the words you want to translate...
If you cannot find anything, it doesn't matter...
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 22-01-2025 à 15:48:06 (S | E)
Hello!
I'll post ANSWER B (which was in fact the first to come [sorry to its writer...
]late tonight or tomorrow morning...Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de magie8, postée le 23-01-2025 à 03:53:20 (S | E)
hello essai de remaniement de la phrase non satisfaisante
answer A
All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together.The solution was found through compromise on both sides
:or
The solution was found when each of us has made an effort to move forward.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 23-01-2025 à 11:00:39 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Thanks for your efforts!
ANSWER B: Topic3: Did you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
for your help! Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 23-01-2025 à 13:50:43 (S | E)
Hello!
I agree with Magie: two sentences, and the problem is solved. But I still can't understand what was wrong, especially with 'until'
essai de remaniement de la phrase non satisfaisante
answer A
All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together.The solution was found through compromise on both sides:
or
The solution was found when each of us has made an effort to move forward
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de happynutmeg13, postée le 23-01-2025 à 14:03:53 (S | E)
Hello all!
Here is my suggestion:
ANSWER B: Topic3: Did you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some xxx music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or xxx attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de gerold, postée le 23-01-2025 à 17:52:35 (S | E)
Hello all!
I agree with happynutmeg's propositions.
ANSWER B: Topic3:
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some xxx music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time punctuation I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or xxx attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
My spell checker doesn't like "danceable" but I found this adjective in several dictionaries.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 25-01-2025 à 11:39:11 (S | E)
Hello!
Green allowed! [ J'ai beaucoup aimé la façon avec laquelle vous avez "collaboré", et donc, vous avez amélioré ce qui pouvait l'être dans ANSWER A... ('bis repetita placent'!
)] Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de magie8, postée le 25-01-2025 à 12:09:17 (S | E)
Thank you Happynutsmeg and Gerold for your help
ANSWER B: Topic3: Would you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not just any music; (most of them are unbearable for me and ( are just noise in my head. From time to time, I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or ( to attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
(That is to say, music isn't fundamental ( in my life, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de gerold, postée le 25-01-2025 à 12:49:57 (S | E)
Hello magie, and
lANSWER B: Topic3: Would you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not (all kinds of music; (most of them* are unbearable for me and ( are just noise in my head. From time to time, I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or ( to attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
(That is to say, music isn't fundamental ( in my life, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
Or: Having said that/Saying that, (I don't consider music to be fundamental in my life ...
* "Music" is uncountable, a plural noun is needed if we use "them".
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 78 - Taking it easy/ 24 de here4u, postée le 27-01-2025 à 21:59:45 (S | E)
Hello, dears!
ANSWER A. Topic 1: In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?
initial text;
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words
Une bonne expression.
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ANSWER A. Topic 1: 1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents? Gerold writes: Very few mistakes, I think. [You're right!
]In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results (we offered ... school results??) , and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words
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ANSWER A. Topic 1: 1. In your opinion, do teenagers get on well with their parents?: my indications -
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well with both my daughters, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to *anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together,
( cette phrase, beaucoup trop longue, n’est pas claire et mériterait d’être allégée et éclaircie.):The question was 'Do teenagers get on well with their parents... and not the opposite... We wanted the young people's attitudes and thoughts.
* Here, you're giving us your son's reactions:
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Happynutmeg writes: With the help of Gerold and Here4U, thank you I haven't been able to correct everything
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends of the personality of the child: I got on very well on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me
The question was 'Do teenagers get on well with their parents... and not the opposite...
Pour plus de clarté, voici la nouvelle expression corrigée (Happynutmeg
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't (I don't know how to correct )! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. B But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results. All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, untill everybody made an effort to move on... (which indeed proved to be the solution)
Tu as bien corrigé le peu d'erreurs qu'il y avait et les points de vue !
Il reste à éliminer les maladresses et les parenthèses qui ne facilitent pas la compréhension et t'encouragent à faire des phrases trop longues...
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Gerold thanks happynutmeg! and gives his suggestions.
In my opinion, there is no general rule, and whereas some do, some others don't (I don't know how to correct) (perhaps it should be more explicit: ... whereas some teenagers do get on well with their parents ...)[Très bonne idée, et cela permettrait de placer 'whereas' au bon endroit!]! If I consider my personal experience as a mother of three children, I'd say it mainly depends on the child's character: both my daughters got on very well with me, because they accepted the way we were raising them: we expected them to be good -even very good- at school as well as at anything (I confess we were very demanding) and we gave them all the support they needed to succeed. But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results. All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, until everybody made an effort to move on... (which indeed proved to be the solution) (Was "unless" the problem in the original sentence, or something else?)
Happynutmeg writes: Dear Gerold,The problem was not only 'unless', but the last part of the sentence...
Happynutmeg is right. I'd say of course you had the link word wrong... But it wasn't THE solution, it was a solution... which didn't satisfy me much... The sentence itself is much too long and should be divided into at least two...(taking advantage of this split to improve the construction...) [Some teenagers get on well with their parents whereas others don't!- easy, isn't it?]
Could anyone do that, please?
Bravo pour les corrections du début du texte. Le point de vue a maintenant changé totalement et c'est bien !
Happynutmeg suggests: Original sentence:
But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, passtimes, school results, and all this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...) 145 words ( cette phrase, beaucoup trop longue, n’est pas claire et mériterait d’être allégée et éclaircie.):
New sentence:
But concerning my son, things were utterly different: from the very beginning, he got totally opposed to anything we offered, including food, sport, pastimes... And he couldn't have cared less about school results! All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, unless* everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...)
I put 'unless' back instead of 'untill', I don't know which is best to translate "à moins que", but it could also be "jusqu'à ce que"
Gerold adds: ... unless* everybody made an effort to move on...(which indeed proved to be the solution...)
I put 'unless' back instead of 'until', I don't know which is best to translate "à moins que", but it could also be "jusqu'à ce que". Bien! Both do!
Gerold notices, I agree, but the original sentence is back.
Perhaps:
... ... unless (or until) each of us made an effort (or compromised) to move on
Is this better, dear here4u? It's good, dears!
The first part of the solution (putting a full stop after 'school results') is good! But I'd be really happy with a transformation of the last sentence, including what is between parentheses...
Try to think about the meaning you want to convey, more than the words you want to translate...
If you cannot find anything, it doesn't matter...
'All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together, until both kid and parents made an effort to move on...This progress enabled us, indeed, to find the solution...'
This sentence would be a simple, but efficient way of being clearer .
Magie writes: hello essai de remaniement de la phrase non satisfaisante
answer A
All this made it quite impossible for us to get on well together.The solution was found through compromise on both sides: or
The solution was found when each of us (has)made an effort to move forward.
Thanks for your efforts!
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ANSWER B: Topic3: Did you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
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Here are happynutmeg's suggestions:
ANSWER B: Topic3: Did you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some xxx music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or xxx attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
Gerold writes: I agree with happynutmeg's propositions.
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ANSWER B: Topic3: Would you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not all of it. Some xxx music is unbearable for me and is just noise in my head. From time to time punctuation I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or xxx attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
Having said that, music isn't fundamental to me, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days. [I'm not sure I understand the two underlined determiners...]
My spell checker doesn't like "danceable" but I found this adjective in several dictionaries.[I like it!]
[J'ai beaucoup aimé la façon avec laquelle vous avez "collaboré", et donc, vous avez amélioré ce qui pouvait l'être dans ANSWER A... ('bis repetita placent'! )]
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ANSWER B: Topic3: Would you say that music is fundamental in your life? Gerold's suggestions
I'd say I enjoy music, but not just any music; (most of them )are unbearable for me and ( are just noise in my head. From time to time, I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or ( to attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
(That is to say, music isn't fundamental ( in my life, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
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ANSWER B: Topic3: Would you say that music is fundamental in your life?
I'd say I enjoy music, but not (all kinds of music; (most of them* are unbearable for me and ( are just noise in my head. From time to time, I listen to something harmonious, danceable, languorous or relaxing. I like a song with a good text, or ( to attend an opera performance or a philharmonic concert.
(That is to say, music isn't fundamental ( in my life, it's far from being a passion, it's just pleasant. Music doesn't occupy all my days.
Or: Having said that/Saying that, (I don't consider music to be fundamental in my life ...
* "Music" is uncountable, a plural noun is needed if we use "them".
N'oubliez pas que vous avez toujours la possibilité de reprendre une phrase, ou un morceau de paragraphe encore douteux, en un Follow Up Work où vous pourrez vous essayer à vos solutions, et si possible, répondre aux interrogations qui demeurent...
En attendant, BRAVO
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