Playing with words!/7
Cours gratuits > Forum > Exercices du forum || En basMessage de here4u posté le 11-05-2020 à 23:10:16 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!


Voici le nouveau "Playing with words"...
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu ...



Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE.
- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!
PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS!
To POUR - to SUCCEED - a VEGETERIAN – an EXECUTIVE - GENTLE - TRUE - AT LEAST – MEANWHILE - + une forme passive.
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Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens.

Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte (entre 30 et 60 mots ...) Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !

Cet exercice est TRES difficile,





La date limite pour cet exercice est le samedi 30 mai 2020 tard. (Ne pas dépasser 60 mots … Merci.



Réponse : Playing with words!/7 de taiji43, postée le 14-05-2020 à 18:28:02 (S | E)
- to SUCCEED - a VEGETERIAN – an EXECUTIVE - GENTLE - TRUE - AT LEAST – MEANWHILE - + une forme passive.
Hello Here4U
Not very easy and my text is a litte weird...
READY TO BE CORRECTED
He was a health EXECUTIVE at the hospital where VEGETARIANS every day POURED to consult him as a nutrionnist appreciated by them;because he had SUCCEEDED in making a JUST reputation for his prescriptions and his GENTLE behavior ; AT LEAST that’s what was said for the MEANTIME 48
il était cadre de santé à l'hôpital où les végétariens tous les jours jour affluaient pour le consulter en tant que nutritionniste apprécié par eux ,car il avait réussi à se faire une vraie renommée pour ses prescriptions et son gentil comportement . ; du moins c'est ce qu'on disait, en attendant... !To POUR
Réponse : Playing with words!/7 de joe39, postée le 16-05-2020 à 18:54:45 (S | E)
Hello dear here4u,
Here is my try, ready to be corrected, whose contents is somehow ironic but also sadly euphemistic, if referred to a notorious evil genius..
A VEGETARIAN is considered a person of GENTLE manners AT LEAST for the fact he loathes the violence towards animals to make them our main food, so that he SUCCEED in being considered a TRUE friend of the animal kingdom, but MEANWHILE, like a totalitarian top EXECUTIVE, he could attempts TO POUR into our dishes something that IS BEING NOT ACCEPTED by our palate. 58
I thank you very much for this demanding exercise and I hope you have a sweet Sunday but...taking care.
So long.
Joe39
Réponse : Playing with words!/7 de maxwell, postée le 30-05-2020 à 11:12:34 (S | E)
READY TO BE CORRECTED
Hello!

Before it's too late and before I regret it...
BTW, there's a typo : VEGETARIAN
He had been talking about how he SUCCEEDED in becoming a chief EXECUTIVE for AT LEAST one interminable hour; MEANWHILE, wearing a TRUE and GENTLE smile, he POURED me a glass of water, thinking nothing else could BE DRUNK by VEGETARIAN women. (42W)
Réponse : Playing with words!/7 de cathynova, postée le 30-05-2020 à 18:30:07 (S | E)
It is TRUE that a VEGETARIAN POURED some GENTLE soap in the hall MEANWHILE the staff was eating , then he SUCCEEDED AT LEAST to be fired by an EXECUTIVE.
Réponse : Playing with words!/7 de here4u, postée le 31-05-2020 à 09:44:09 (S | E)
Hello!

Peu de volontaires pour jouer, ce mois-ci... Etait-ce trop difficile, ou étiez-vous simplement trop absorbés par d'autres tâches, d'autres contraintes ? J'ai "corrigé" en prenant soin de suivre les règles imposées et en m'efforçant de respecter votre pensée ... J'espère ne pas vous avoir trahis ...

Au moment de la correction, un nouveau post !



- He was a health EXECUTIVE at the hospital where every day, VEGETARIANS were used to POURing in to consult him as a favoured nutritionist because he had SUCCEEDED in making a JUST reputation for his prescriptions and his GENTLE behavior; AT LEAST that’s what was said and in the MEANTIME, he thrived…
C’ était un cadre de santé à l'hôpital où tous les jours des végétariens affluaient pour le consulter en tant que nutritionniste réputé ; il avait réussi à se faire une vraie renommée pour ses prescriptions et son gentil comportement ; du moins c'est ce que l'on disait, et en attendant, il prospérait …
- A VEGETARIAN is considered a person of GENTLE manners, AT LEAST for the fact he loathes any violence towards animals to turn them into our main food ; he SUCCEEDed in being considered a TRUE friend of the animal kingdom, but MEANWHILE, like a totalitarian top EXECUTIVE, he could attempt TO POUR into our dishes something that isn’t ACCEPTED by our palate.
- He had been talking about how he SUCCEEDED in becoming a chief EXECUTIVE for AT LEAST one interminable hour; MEANWHILE, wearing a TRUE and GENTLE smile, he POURED me a glass of water, thinking nothing else could BE DRUNK by VEGETARIAN women.
- It is TRUE that a VEGETARIAN POURED some GENTLE soap into the hall; MEANWHILE the staff were eating, astonished; therefore, AT LEAST he SUCCEEDED in being fired by an EXECUTIVE.
Bravo à tous !




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