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Message de fannyb posté le 17-10-2019 à 20:23:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j’ai écrit un court article sur les familles.
Pouvez-vous, s’il vous plaît m’indiquer mes erreurs ?
Merci d’avance
The families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families like : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see president families ( = comment les gens voient les familles des présidents) and how families are presented in series.
First, lest’s talk about two famous president families: the Obama family and the Reagan family. Those families were president families of the USA. Both families are traditional families with two children. "They look like perfect families, who are always happy." That is what many people think about them . But those families are not perfect they have problems and surely they sometimes feel angry and sadly , like every families.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . Unlikely, they often argue between them to make us laugh. Frequently in them series it’s one big family with many different characters in them. But not every family series are like that . Occasionally, families in series talk about different families like a single parent families and there asset , there problems.
So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like us family. Maybe you think that yours family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every families in the world are different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s yours unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect or rather every families in the world are perfect
Les mots en vert sont des mots dont je ne suis pas sûre.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2019 22:46
Message de fannyb posté le 17-10-2019 à 20:23:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j’ai écrit un court article sur les familles.
Pouvez-vous, s’il vous plaît m’indiquer mes erreurs ?
Merci d’avance
The families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families like : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see president families ( = comment les gens voient les familles des présidents) and how families are presented in series.
First, lest’s talk about two famous president families: the Obama family and the Reagan family. Those families were president families of the USA. Both families are traditional families with two children. "They look like perfect families, who are always happy." That is what many people think about them . But those families are not perfect they have problems and surely they sometimes feel angry and sadly , like every families.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . Unlikely, they often argue between them to make us laugh. Frequently in them series it’s one big family with many different characters in them. But not every family series are like that . Occasionally, families in series talk about different families like a single parent families and there asset , there problems.
So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like us family. Maybe you think that yours family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every families in the world are different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s yours unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect or rather every families in the world are perfect
Les mots en vert sont des mots dont je ne suis pas sûre.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2019 22:46
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de fannyb, postée le 18-10-2019 à 16:14:22 (S | E)
Enfaite je ne sais pas si dire " president families " est juste. Peut être c'est mieux de dire " familles of presidents " ?
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de fannyb, postée le 18-10-2019 à 20:22:44 (S | E)
Bonjour, j’ai Fait de petites modifications à mon texte
Families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families like : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see president’s families and how families are presented in series.
First, let’s talk about two famous president families: the Obama family and the Reagan family. These families were presidents’ families of the USA. Both families are traditional families with two children. "They see to be a perfect families." That is what many people think about them . But these families are not perfect they have problems and they sometimes feel angry and sadly , like every families.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . Unlikely, they often argue between them to make us laugh. Frequently in them series it’s one big family with many different characters who showed. But not every families’ series are like that . Occasionally, families in series are different families, like a single parent families and their asset , their problems.
So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like us family. Maybe you think that your family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every families in the world are different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s your unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect or rather every families in the world are perfect !
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de here4u, postée le 18-10-2019 à 21:26:06 (S | E)
Hello,
Families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families like : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see president’s families and how families are presented in series.
First, let’s talk about two famous president families: the Obama family and the Reagan family. These families were presidents’ families of the USA. (construction à revoir) Both families are traditional families with two children. "They see to be a perfect families.(mélange singulier/ pluriel)" That is what many people think about them . But these families are not perfect they have problems and they sometimes feel angry and sadly , like every families.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . Unlikely, they often argue between them to make us laugh. Frequently in them series it’s one big family with many different characters who showed.
(showed what?)But not every families’ series are like that . Occasionally, families in series are different families, like a single parent families and their asset , their problems.So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like us family. Maybe you think that your family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every families in the world are different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s your unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect or rather every families in the world are perfect !
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de fannyb, postée le 18-10-2019 à 22:14:46 (S | E)
Families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families like : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see presidents’ families and how families are presented in series.
First, let’s talk about two famous presidents’ families : the Obama family and the Reagan family. These families were the families of the presidents of the USA. Both families are traditional families with two children. "They seem to be perfect families.(mélange singulier/ pluriel)" That is what many people think about them . But these families are not perfect they have problems and they sometimes feel angry and sad , like every family.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . On the contrary, they often argue amongst themselves to make us laugh. Frequently in these series it’s one big family with many different characters who is showed. But not every family in series is( j’ai un gros doute sur la personne) like that . Occasionally, families who are presented in series are different families, like a single parent families and their qualities , their problems.
So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like our family. Maybe you think that your family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every family in the world is different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s your unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect or rather every family in the world is perfect !
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de here4u, postée le 19-10-2019 à 18:26:28 (S | E)
Hello!
Families in our society
Nowadays there are several types of families, like (such as) : reconstituted families, traditional families, same sex families, single-parent families and host families. In this article, we will see how people see presidents’ families and how families are presented in series.
First, let’s talk about two famous presidents’ families : the Obama family and the Reagan family. These families were the families of the two presidents of the USA. Both families are traditional families with two children. "They seem to be perfect families." That is what many people think about them . But these families are not perfect, they have problems and they sometimes feel angry and sad , like every family.
Secondly, families in series are not presented like perfect families . On the contrary, they often argue amongst themselves with each other to make us laugh. Frequently in these series it’s one big family with many different characters who is(verbe au singulier? sujet au pluiel !) showed.
But not every family in series is like that . Occasionally, families who are presented in series are different families= ambiguous... , like a single parent families and their qualities , their problems.So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like our family. Maybe you think that your family is so bad compared to other families. But you must not forget , every family in the world is different, with their qualities and their flaws. However, it’s your unique family and you have to be happy with them, have(spend?) good time with them . Because no families in the world are perfect(mettre au singulie) or rather every family in the world is perfect !
Réponse : Expression Écrite/Article de gerold, postée le 19-10-2019 à 18:58:35 (S | E)
Hello
So nowadays, it’s not always easy to like our family. Il me semble qu'il faudrait dire plutôt one's family (l'amour que l'on a pour sa propre famille).
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