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Message de jane37 posté le 05-10-2019 à 05:42:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
je dois exprimer en quelques lignes "What are you doing to save the planet? "
J'ai écrit ce texte:Serait -il possible d'en vérifier le vocabulaire, la grammaire s'il vous plait?
Two little voices tell me.
When I wash my teeth while running the tap-water
2 little voices tell me:
"Do not waste water, one day we will have not anymore!
Think of us! "
When I throw a plastic bottle in the ordinary trash,
2 little voices tell me:
Have you heard about selective sorting?
Think of us!
When I'm wasting paper
2 little voices tell me
Have you thought about the trees used to make it?
One day there will not be anymore!
Think of us,
When I throw old clothes or old objects
2 little voices tell me:
Give them instead of throwing them away,
it can still be useful,
Think of us and others!
These two little voices are those of my Grand-children for whom the air must remain breathable and the water unpolluted.
So,if I want to save the planet, I have to listen to my grandchildren!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-10-2019 11:08
Message de jane37 posté le 05-10-2019 à 05:42:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
je dois exprimer en quelques lignes "What are you doing to save the planet? "
J'ai écrit ce texte:Serait -il possible d'en vérifier le vocabulaire, la grammaire s'il vous plait?
Two little voices tell me.
When I wash my teeth while running the tap-water
2 little voices tell me:
"Do not waste water, one day we will have not anymore!
Think of us! "
When I throw a plastic bottle in the ordinary trash,
2 little voices tell me:
Have you heard about selective sorting?
Think of us!
When I'm wasting paper
2 little voices tell me
Have you thought about the trees used to make it?
One day there will not be anymore!
Think of us,
When I throw old clothes or old objects
2 little voices tell me:
Give them instead of throwing them away,
it can still be useful,
Think of us and others!
These two little voices are those of my Grand-children for whom the air must remain breathable and the water unpolluted.
So,if I want to save the planet, I have to listen to my grandchildren!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-10-2019 11:08
Réponse : Correction/planet de lucile83, postée le 21-10-2019 à 09:24:59 (S | E)
Anyone? 
Réponse : Correction/planet de here4u, postée le 21-10-2019 à 10:15:39 (S | E)
hello!
Two little voices tell me.
When I wash my teeth while running the tap-water
2 little voices tell me:
"Do not waste water, one day we will have not anymore!
Think of us! "
When I throw a plastic bottle in the ordinary trash,
2 little voices tell me:
Have you heard about selective sorting?
Think of us!
When I'm wasting paper
2 little voices tell me
Have you thought about the trees used to make it?
One day there will not be anymore!
Think of us,
When I throw old clothes or old objects
2 little voices tell me:
Give them instead of throwing them away,
it can still be useful,
Think of us and others!
These two little voices are those of my Grand-children for whom the air must remain breathable and the water unpolluted.
So, if I want to save the planet, I have to listen to my grandchildren!
Réponse : Correction/planet de jane37, postée le 28-10-2019 à 13:58:41 (S | E)
Thanks for your reading and apréciations !
jane
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